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"I want you to see this world through my eyes."

You act like you're alright  
When behind closed doors
You cry alone into the night

You don't have to be alone
No one's going to judge you
If you just tell the truth

Don't be someone you're not
You're not fooling anyone
With that painted on smile

Just take my hand for a moment
And I'll show you how perfect
You truly are without a mask

You can be something more
Than what they want you to be
No one's going to judge you

Look all around you
And you'll see that so many others
Are just like you

Don't hide behind closed doors
I'll give you my shoulder to cry on
In the end you won't be alone

"I want you to just for a moment open your eyes."

This world doesn't
Have to be dark and lonely
I'll show you how perfect you are

You can be yourself
In our perfect world
Don't forget about our snow angels

It was years ago
But their still there
In that perfect white snow

Just take my hand for a moment
And I'll show you how perfect
You truly are without a mask

No one's going to judge you
Just come out and shine
Like a bright night star

Take my hand for a moment
And we'll escape to that world
One more time

We'll lie in our field
Of colorful flowers
And stare up at the night sky

Share your secrets with me
I'm here to listen to only you
So please speak to me

We'll reach for the stars
And make bright wishes
Until we're out of breathe

You'll be alright in the end
Just take my hand for a moment
Because I'll be your friend
Take my hand for a moment and I'll show you how perfect you are to me...
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Inspiration: [link]
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"In the end, we're all perfect."
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M4gicianANDsh4dow Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
this text is excellent *.*
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KireiNova Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :hug:
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GirFann Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
I love it! Your poem sounds like what my mom writes. :]
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KireiNova Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Really? o:
Does she have an account so I could check out her work? :]
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GirFann Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011
No sadly she doesn't :[
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:iconkireinova:
KireiNova Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, that's too bad :[
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
that is the best one i have ever read. that describes me so much. my family wants me to become someone i dang sure ain't and all i want to do is be me. thank you so much for that peom keep writing. that just gave me the most inspirations to stand up for my family and it's because of you. please for me and all your other fans keep writing
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KireiNova Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:huggles:
Too be honest, comments like this one want to make me cry a little :]
I'm so glade that my poem meant that much to you :hug:
I hope everything works out for you in the end,
and don't worry, I will always keep writing :tighthug:
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alittlebitoffaith Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
thx. i hope so to check out my peoms you might like them hope to see more of you work
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KireiNova Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Alright :aww:
I'll be writing soon :]
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xXCliche-TradgedyXx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
This is great! (: I especially love this line
"You act like you're alright
When behind closed doors
You cry alone into the night"
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KireiNova Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! (:
I like that line to,
I thought it fit so perfectly
for the beginning line of the poem :]
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xXCliche-TradgedyXx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
You're welcome (: And yes, it did [:
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KireiNova Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe :]
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GlassAct Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011
I needed it. I am all time trying to be someone else. It has been so long now that I have forgotten my real self. sad
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KireiNova Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You need to find something that makes you
who you really are. Being someone you're not
is like putting on a mask and hiding the tears
from everyone else.
Trust me, I've been and it's a sad place to be,
but I found my writing and come out through it,
making life just a little easier to handle.
And with my poetry, I can truly be myself.

If you need someone to talk to, I'm here if you want :]
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13mc13 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011
perfect
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:iconkireinova:
KireiNova Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :tighthug:
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LovelyEver Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011
this is really good :D
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KireiNova Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :huggle:
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LovelyEver Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011
np
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Aqua-Goddess Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Simply Amazing.....
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:iconkireinova:
KireiNova Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug: Thanks :]
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Aqua-Goddess Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:nod:
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narusaku9 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011
I love that song. And this is great :heart:
It what everyone should learn to do... just be to be who they are :)
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KireiNova Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Exactly and me too :heart:
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